Though Bryony planned her essay well unfortunately lack of effective research detracts from what could have been a very interesting essay.Level 2 - see assessment sheet.
On re-reading this essay Bryony has proficiently analysed the purpose and effect of claustrophobic spaces in the two films she references. She has also gone to some trouble to illustrate her points by providing stills - thus strenthening her commentary.I'd revise mark to Level 3 .
Overall assessment for research into the thriller genre indicates basic understanding. (see my other posts).Level 2 (upper) 11/20
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Though Bryony planned her essay well unfortunately lack of effective research detracts from what could have been a very interesting essay.
Level 2 - see assessment sheet.
On re-reading this essay Bryony has proficiently analysed the purpose and effect of claustrophobic spaces in the two films she references.
She has also gone to some trouble to illustrate her points by providing stills - thus strenthening her commentary.
I'd revise mark to Level 3 .
Overall assessment for research into the thriller genre indicates basic understanding. (see my other posts).
Level 2 (upper) 11/20
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